Mary With Some Hope
Mary had lived most of her life like normal children. She would often play with the other kids. She loved ice cream, pizza and gummy bears.
All seemed fine til one day her chest started to hurt real bad. Mary's father took her to the doctor and they found out she had a very rare life threatening cancer. Even though the cancer was rare, the good news was that there was only one doctor with the skills and tools to help Mary and he lived in town. When they found the doctor that could help he said, "If Mary did not receive treatment soon then she would die."
The doctor they found said that he could do surgery to get the cancer out but the nearby hospital did not have the proper anesthetic for the surgery. Mary would have to go to a specific hospital in another country. The hospital could only be reached by boat so they left as soon as possible.
Mary quickly got on the boat with her father. The doctor was with them as well with his special tools. On the way there Mary got more sick. The cancer was affecting her body more and more as time went by. And to make matters worse the ship was changing course due to an incoming storm.
Time was running out for Mary and the Doctor knew it. If they didn't get to the hospital soon then the doctor would have to do surgery without the proper anesthetic in order to save her life. Which was the last thing the doctor wanted to do.
The weather got worse and the ship could not find a way around it. The captain of the ship saw an island nearby where the weather was better so they headed that direction. As they headed for the island the waves got so strong that it tossed everyone to and fro. The ship tossed Mary hard into a wall. Mary put her hands in front of her to stop from slamming into the wall but broke both arms could not handle the force. Both of Mary's arms had be broken.
The storm was so bad that the captain could not see the rocks that were near the island and the ship ran straight into them. The shock from the collision threw Mary backwards into a table that hit her lower back first and then her head. The impact of the table caused her to be paralyzed from the waist down and gave her a concussion.
Because the damage from the crash was so great the ship began to sink. The doctor ran to get Mary, who was paralyzed and laying in the corner passed out.
The doctor was very careful to keep his surgical tools close to him as he picked Mary up and put her in a life boat. The doctor and others paddled very fast to get to shore. They where still afraid of the storm. Also the waves where very high causing water to enter the boat where may was laying so the doctor lifted Mary's head high so she would not drown.Soon the doctor and Mary got the shore along with some other people. Everyone was in a panic. Fathers looking for their children and children crying looking for their parents and all kinds of people in pain because of the crash. Getting to shore was one thing but Mary's condition had worsened. Mary would soon die if the doctor would not perform surgery right then and there. As the doctor was getting his tools..... Now read Mary with no Hope.
Why would Mary have hope in this situation?
How did knowing the context of the story help?
How did knowing who was causing Mary's pain help give her hope?
If Mary would have known that it was a doctor causing her the pain would she be mad or angry with the doctor for opening her up and saving her life even if it caused her all that pain?
Everything that was needed to know to give Mary hope was either forgotten by Mary in the hopeless version of the story or she could not see clearly to understand who it was that was causing her so much pain.








